So heartbreaking to read Lu...haven't lost a parent, but did a Grandma and I watched my dad suffer immensely after losing his mom.. I too pray for healing and comfort for your family. And I truly hope writing will help you feel even the slightest bit better :)
You're being there as much as you can for your mother and emotionally, it's a help to her. Just knowing that your there. You brought to light the cold, harsh reality in this piece and it breaks my heart. When I lost my mum, it brought me a mixture of emotions and they're one's I pray you don't have to feel yet. You're strong. Keep fighting. Miss you x
Whoa, I can relate soooo much to this! This is really strong and really touching. Hit such a nerve of emotions with me can't say enough about it. The way you open it drew me in and made me want to read more, I was so easily able to feel your emotions and thoughts throughout this poem. I can relate is so many ways, you did a great job. Keep up the amazing work.
I'm so sorry you have to go through this Lu but you should know you are already strong and that you & your family will make it through this. I pray your mom gets better. Know that my thoughts are always with you and your family. Such sadness in your words but I have faith that the sun will shine soon :) Love you!
I'm really sorry you to go through this, my prayers are with your mother Lu to a safe recovery. I found the emotions pelt out like tears on a suffering rose bud, the pain engulfing each word, the hope recovering into prayers and wishes.
I love the way you began stanza two with a prayer type concept with a hope of a miracle to heal all the illness and bring life to what it once was. I felt exactly the same when my aunt died, all I wanted was for her to open her eyes and to show us her amazingly warming smile and tell us everything is all right.
Yet although she is gone her memories remain alive inside my still beating heart, I pray that your mum and your family is safe and that nothing happens to her.
All in all this was a heart felt, powerful and touching poem.