Ah, this is going straight into my favorites.
I simply love it... the imagery of her opening a book of her memories, photo album/scrapbook.. and seeing the rose that still has scent and all those memories and feelings flood back... love it!
5 years ago
by Lune de ma vie
Real powerful, very sweet and explains love at it's finest.
Truly magical, I can relate in areas with love and someone showing you exactly what no other person as ever been able to show you, opening your heart to a whole new world. I'm experience it now actually and it is a journey, taking the bad with the good because love is truly worth it.
You were really able to explain the feelings within you so simply yet in a way that is deep and full of strong loving, passionate emotion. I really enjoyed this write, beautifully done. Keep it up.
Ending two stanzas were profoundly powerful. always good to end strong. in a couple places the flow tripped me up a little, "say to him that" for instance made me stop and think about whether it was an error before reading the next line and realizing that it wasnt, but that might just be my reading/writing style coming out in conflict with yours