The first days of Fall and all that is left is a touch of Summer which you have captured very well.

Can I borrow those eyes? Nice scenery!

Reminds me of Okinawa- very humid!

5/5!

I am always like to read this type of poems gid written 5/5

Summer comes alive! I love "ardent eyes"
Your personfications are so well crafted. You bring to a close so nicely with night crawling in! thanks!

This is such a beautiful poem with vivid imagery. It has sound details as well giving an added charm. Captivates the reader and it feels so natural reading it. Though it ends in a span of short time, it satisfies the senses and ones curiosity about the shining sunshine's summer. I loved how you bloomed and ended it all exquisitely.

My forte is writing nature poems and incorporating nature into my themes. So whenever i read a nature piece, it gives me a sense of realism. Good choice of words and excellent integration of the form, giving it a nice outlook. Good work and keep churning lovely works.
Cheers! :) ..

Never thought of a poem for summer could be written so beautifully...surely could imagine winter but summer....no way :)

Great work dear.

all the best & take care

I LOVE this Meena! :) ... The opening lines just drew me in....

"Summer
her ardent eyes
touch all corners of earth"

It is such a beautiful form and your words in this poem describing summer perfect it!

BRAVO my friend!

So beautifully penned and breathtaking.....

Wow... this is so amazing.
I love your personification of summer... and your word usage is perfect.

Ardent eyes, torrid soul, night crawls... just ahhh, wonderful. <3

I think I'll add this to my favorites! :)

You do take your poetry seriously. Good job. How you been? Been a long time.

Seriously beautiful and I love the way you incorporated this piece in a rictameter...
Excellent:)

I really like how i could imagine it . very descriptive. kinda dark. i like it :) sorry it took me so long to read it .

Exquisite Meena!!!