Comments : A touch of Summer (Rictameter)

  • 5 years ago

    by Sylvia

    The first days of Fall and all that is left is a touch of Summer which you have captured very well.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Can I borrow those eyes? Nice scenery!

    Reminds me of Okinawa- very humid!

    5/5!

  • 5 years ago

    by Mohan

    I am always like to read this type of poems gid written 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by yogi73

    Summer comes alive! I love "ardent eyes"
    Your personfications are so well crafted. You bring to a close so nicely with night crawling in! thanks!

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is such a beautiful poem with vivid imagery. It has sound details as well giving an added charm. Captivates the reader and it feels so natural reading it. Though it ends in a span of short time, it satisfies the senses and ones curiosity about the shining sunshine's summer. I loved how you bloomed and ended it all exquisitely.

    My forte is writing nature poems and incorporating nature into my themes. So whenever i read a nature piece, it gives me a sense of realism. Good choice of words and excellent integration of the form, giving it a nice outlook. Good work and keep churning lovely works.
    Cheers! :) ..

  • 5 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Never thought of a poem for summer could be written so beautifully...surely could imagine winter but summer....no way :)

    Great work dear.

    all the best & take care

  • 4 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I LOVE this Meena! :) ... The opening lines just drew me in....

    "Summer
    her ardent eyes
    touch all corners of earth"

    It is such a beautiful form and your words in this poem describing summer perfect it!

    BRAVO my friend!

    So beautifully penned and breathtaking.....

  • 4 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Wow... this is so amazing.
    I love your personification of summer... and your word usage is perfect.

    Ardent eyes, torrid soul, night crawls... just ahhh, wonderful. <3

    I think I'll add this to my favorites! :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Timothy

    You do take your poetry seriously. Good job. How you been? Been a long time.

  • 4 years ago

    by Amreen

    Seriously beautiful and I love the way you incorporated this piece in a rictameter...
    Excellent:)

  • 4 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I really like how i could imagine it . very descriptive. kinda dark. i like it :) sorry it took me so long to read it .

  • 4 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisite Meena!!!