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by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA Sep 30, 2012
Nature, environment /
Like a wisp of wind
or scattering of leaves
winter's chill departs
to allow spring's reprieve.
Warmth embraces all
from human to flowers;
like a kiss of affection,
we journey September's hours.
30 September 2012
by Hannah Lizette
Lately, I've been really digging nature poems...and this is one of the ones I find myself reading over and over again. It's a breath of fresh air, I love the subtle rhyme and the beautiful imagery.
by Baby Rainbow
Alisha this is beautiful. A little rhyme and nature in a lovely little poem. Nice work.
You penned the transition from a season of death and cold to a season of rebirth. I love Spring and the blooming of the flowers then. The imagery is just so beautiful with just a few words used.
by Maple Tree
"Kiss of affection" now there is a beaut of wording right there... Oh I do love this poem... comforting piece!
Alisha you have done something very rare. You made me like a rhyming nature poem lol..
This was beautiful, your rhymes weren't an over used rhyme, they were some what unique and helped the flow a lot...
I found your imagery to be flawless and this turned out to be a quick beautiful poem!