You are perfection.
All of your poems, now I can say, have this touch of European romance... those ones we see in movies... on foggy streets... taxis going and coming.... I can't explain this image really. So Unique and warm... and dreamy.

Loved loved loved loved loved it I swearrrrrr....
I have 1 nomination left, but I can't nominate, it seems, on Sundays :p lol, I lost this vote. hehe

Such beauty in this piece! I love the image of the cigarettes and taxi- there's something so dreamy and crazy about being in a city, with all that traffic around you. Very lively :) And the part that made me say "ohh" was the lips opening and closing like fairy tale books....I love going in old book stores and finding those huge books of Hans Christian Anderson or some other tales and it just amazes me....so much imagination in them!
A sweet ending, simple. I love how you mentioned October too, I don't know what it is about this month but I love incorporating it in poems, it sounds so poetic to say lol...anyway I know you write months in your poems and I like that about your style. It makes it intimate to the month.

A picturesque scene, great read Noura!!!
Hope you're having a good weekend~

It is real romance. Amazing. Excellent written my friend.

First of all I'd just say I wasn't keen on the title it....well it needed something extra for this?

This reminded me of some old black and white movie...possibly starring Humphrey Boghart whom ....you probably haven't even heard of? anyway...I loved the scene because you set it as vitrually one

We're amidst the crazy
city; October dimness, women with
huge bags tugging kids - prancing, fulfilled
and carefree, sottish lights everywhere
altering from red to green to... peculiar.
Me, standing there with my half-devoured
cigarette, covetting the vista of a taxi, your

Ok...this scene is brilliant for, I see you as the observer in all the chaos that going on...quitely smoking as you take it all in...
lips openning themselves and locking themselves *opening*
like a fairytales book *faitytale*
and through (*the*) traffic jam, through my puzzled
feet and desperate smirks, I hear you saying
something sweet... It's...

^^^^

Oh you drag this down....keeping the reader waiting....very clever!

It's when we are put together against
the mercilessness of our time and you just
look at my drowse then grab me
closer to your shoulders

^^^^

This part left me to ponder...are you waiting in a queue next to this peson and you feel faint....he grabs you....I like this ending...

Really loved this one....

I feel that I indeed was made
just
for you.

Noura...My Dear, This was absolutely breathtakingly beautiful, to the point where I felt the chill in my spine, that feeling when something just feels perfect...right here girl, right here.

I loved the scene, how it felt so dreamy, so surreal but so evident too, like it made sense,

There were just some lovely little things in here that made me love it so...
the whole intimate yet distant details, like the "half-devoured cigarette", it was just so mesmerizing

OMG You just took my heart and painted it with pink roses... LOL
xxx

Simply beautiful, romance in one of its purest forms.

This piece is evocative of pure feelings. I loved how you described your emotions grandly through simple moments. Love is lucidly the most exalted of all heart felt emotions. So real and pure are your descriptions and within the careful detailing of how love is between two lovers, you managed awesomely to keep the relationship of your theme as well as structure in order. How exemplary is that. I so much adored how you executed this whole piece, it makes one think. Vivid sound imagery you painted. Gets one to appreciate all these moments when we're meshed in our affairs.

How much we hardly take notice of each others presence, but such speak alot of rooted bond that has taken years to develop. Rather it was just a match made in heaven that we seem to be ignorant of our actions. I believe its always good to cherish every moment we have, whether with our own thoughts or amongst crowd. Someday when such times for one another are hard to come by, those moments shared will be worth pondering over.

Beautifully thought out. You're such a burgeoning talent that must be kept a close watch on. Keep them coming. Bon Travail! :) ..

Fantastically written, loved the flow and wording of this piece.

There isnt much that hasnt been said already...but i have to say i adore this write, your pen amazes me always.