Comments : Unborn child

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Biggest hug in the world!!!!!!! I'm here for you....

  • 11 years ago

    by Gone Forever

    Sweetie you'll get by *hugs*

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    HUG HUG HUG, I'll be your shoulder dude, bro!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Kelwin... I think this is your best poem.... so much heart and emotion and feeling was thrown into this. You'll have many more babies and they'll be adorable. But let little Sapheria rest in peace.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This absolutely breaks my heart. I know no matter the amount of "I'm sorry" you may hear, it will never take away the pain of losing your unborn baby and the mother of your child. I couldn't even fathom the pain you are experiencing. :(

    I'm glad you are turning to writing to help you through your painful experience, I truly do feel like poetry helps heal the soul.

    Take care.

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    The flow was just beautiful it spoke to the heart even if they were heartless like me it's very beautiful it shouts the emotions that you put in there and that's just amazing although one word was wrong sorry but to you it wasn't but it's "there" when it should be "their" sorry it's just me lol but beautiful sweetie 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

  • 11 years ago

    by Guy Epsilon

    Today my daughter is 9 months old. She to, as with all of us, could not have been. She was a 1 in 5000 chance according to her doctors.

    I loved this poem for the honesty and I cannot fathom the pain. I wish you the best, please keep writing I truly enjoyed this.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenavia L G

    I was 3 months pregnant with my first baby when I lost it.
    Heartbreaking poem.