By us

by Steven Croat   May 22, 2013


Everything which we have ever created
gained meaning by us.
A minute,
a touch,
not much.
A word
can be the world...

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  • 3 years ago

    by rock serenade

    You said a lot in few words (y)
    good one

  • 4 years ago

    by Aubrey

    I wish i wrote like you...so little words....with a powerful meaning....really good job....5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Lemon

    Lovely poem, I especially love the last 2 lines. Words can be very powerful, often more power than guns and weapons... Words can make someone feel like the happiest person on earth or crush them like a flower. One small issue- the grammar in the first sentence (considering English isn't your first language you're doing very well!) "Everything what we have ever created" I think you mean "Everything which we have ever created". Overall though, I lovet he poem, the short length makes it very effective, good job :)

    • 4 years ago

      by Steven Croat

      Thank you for reading!I will correct the grammar problem...thank you for the advice!

  • 4 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Nothing holds meaning until we create it...a single touch or word can mean the world to us or to someone we love.

    Lovely short piece with a strong meaning behind it. :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is powerful and has a very truthful meaning! I love those first two lines.... it's so reflective, everything we do may not have sense or direction to anyone, even ourselves, unless we make it so. We must appreciate and have value for those actions.

    Beautiful write, short but well-versed :]

    • 4 years ago

      by Steven Croat

      Thank you for reading and commenting! I think it like you.

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