Comments : After your goodbye

  • 4 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Awwwwwwwwwwww this is so beautiful Mohan, I love this poem sooooo much, it is fabulous, splendid, the emotion you put into it is priceless, sad poem though, brought sadness to my heart, great read!

  • 4 years ago

    by dindee

    Hi mo.....

    "like a spring
    you came into my life
    but you are gone like
    a rain drop in the desert "

    ---i love that line.....it describes already everything...

    from the start of your love for her until she bids you bye...

    im thinking how to describe it in one or two words...

    BUBBLE GUM!!!

    sweet can be tasted at first.....but unfortunately the sweetness was gone after chewing it a while and you need to threw it...

    ;)

    well penned mo....=)

  • 4 years ago

    by numbskull

    Beautiful piece.

  • 4 years ago

    by Mams

    Mohon... my friend..i love you for this piece of poem... this was an beautiful poem...
    The title of poem was so amazing that i cudn't help myself frm reading... i read it thrice... cuz it really express the feeling frm wat m going through....
    it was fantastic... everybit of poem was superb..
    Good bless your writing skill...
    keep writing...:)

  • 4 years ago

    by Jeraun Terre

    Love it :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice poem.

  • 4 years ago

    by mira

    Wow so powerful and sensetive really love it it shows how much memories can hurt well done Mohan keep it up 10/10

  • 4 years ago

    by LaBelle

    Great Poem. :-)

  • 4 years ago

    by Tammy R Carllile

    Enchanted by the visions of this poem.

  • 4 years ago

    by Skys Gal

    Wow, so BEAUTIFUL!!!

  • 4 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    I can feel to some extent how you feel all the while..but you know,there is this powerful thing called time which heals every wounds! Stay strong friend!

  • 4 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    This is beautiful and intruging. I like this a lot. 5/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Nicollo Machiavelli

    No doubt great write from the heart.