Sun Shower

by Biancas Veil   Sep 3, 2013


As sun catches the beads that fall like fire from the sky,
Pure bliss courses through my veins,
Bursting colours of life after the grey veil has lifted,
Everyone together on this beautiful day that the sun came,
We watch the Children frolicking in sun drenched flame.

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  • 2 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Beautiful, in so few lines you created so much imagery......apologies for shout but.....ahem....SYRUP YOU SHOULD READ THIS!

    5/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Loved it

  • 3 years ago

    by don

    Inspiring girl, lovely words

    don

  • 4 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    The imagery really is beautiful here. When I think of thesun I think of joy in the heart and everyones life. I love the fire from the sky line. The sun really is fire and the fire or rays make the light in our life. I also like how you say it fills you pur bliss. In my mind it is saying that you were hhaving a bad day and when the sun came out the light lifted your mood. The gray veil has lifted I love it. Colours really brighten up life. I love how you used it though. The sky does have many colours and life all around us is beautiful. The ending made me smile because everyone has pure joy now or at least in your poem. I love the feeling you bring. 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Robin A Walter

    Good, clean expressive realism of a Sun Shower. Thanks.