Comments : Dark Chocolate Skin

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Oh my, this is indeed a gem of a read. Congrats
    on the win too my dear. From start to end the images and emotions just pours out...beautifully penned.

  • 3 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Nicely done here 5\5

  • 3 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    I instantly felt nostalgic when reading this...it reminded of the days when I was a little and my mom would take me to church. And just witnessing the many people in deep prayer, while I twiddle my thumbs naive to everything but my own childish thoughts.

    "with no purpose, other than to held the"
    ^I believe held should be hold here.

    Beautifully penned piece, much enjoyed!