Comments : A Drunk For Christmas

  • 3 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    Beautiful

  • 3 years ago

    by Jack Crimson Nightengale

    This is very touching and the amount of emotion displayed is incredible. Great job

  • 3 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I have been a drunk a few times but not a father (I never had children) This made me proud I don't recall spoiling my mothers Christmas with my disease

    Very well written

  • 2 years ago

    by NoHopeLeft

    Awesome...

  • 2 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    At the beginning of this poem I thought you were talking about your partner, I really did because it sounds like it in a way, and then it turned out it was your dad, God I was shocked. My parents haven't been drunks at all, I disapprove of it. Back to commenting, the imagery and the flow was flawless! I loved how you talked to the readers and a little bit and it was stunning, the emotions you placed in the poem, blew me away. Sadly this happens to many families in the world more often than nothing . Nice poem and I'm sorry if this happened to you personally but like you wrote he was a fool not to know his own child. 5/5

    -Mori