Comments : Doubt (Mirror Cinquain)

  • 2 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    So beautifully penned :) So true !!!!

    In brevity you have penned the consequences :

    "doubt.......makes an open heart
    close its doors in
    anger."
    The most negative emotion which ruins the love bonds.

  • 2 years ago

    by yogi73

    I love the simple wisdom of this poem

  • 2 years ago

    by Everlasting

    In my opinion, it's not the doubt that causes problems. I think is the lack of courage , or sensitivity, or care to communicate how we feel that creates problems. Doubt in itself is a good thing. It comes to strengthen our trust. And to arrive to the truth. However, One mustnt doubt just to doubt. If One doubts, let that be to arrive to the truth.

    Well written poem. Keep writing.

  • 2 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    LUCERO your outlook to the word 'doubt' is so enlightening. Love your positive approach.
    I totally agree when a care to communicate lacks that leads to problems and not the doubt itself.

  • 2 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfully Penned Meena!!!

  • 2 years ago

    by GB

    Fascinating how you doubled and reflected this format, the shape is pretty like the diamante. Darkly interesting theme as well, despite the simple wording. Very enjoyable, Meena.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Nice poem Meena! Doubts indeed can lead to breaking bonds but sometimes telling the truth could hurt the ones closes to you and may change them from who they are. Secret is like an anchor, the more you hold on, the more it gets deeper and heavier.

  • 2 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Vawooooooomeena ji

    Very nice poem & correct

  • 2 years ago

    by Sandstorm

    Loved it. Refreshing form too :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Firstly, many thanks for your kind comments on some of my poems, and may I just say how true this poem is. Excellently written, too.