Comments : The grandmother's story

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I don't know what parts are fiction/non-fiction in this as I said to you in the pm you sent me of it, but it's a heart breaking read - each and every part gripped me and kept me reading to see what the outcome would be.
    The end is a lovely little remedy - a ray of sun and a reminder that things can and will get better.
    All the very best
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its a like a story within a story, a life within a life and I could not make out where fiction and non fiction started or ended. Nonetheless, its a heart rendering story and it also shows when there is love to support, understand and care nothing else is needed to heal a wound..good job!

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    This story kept me interested from beginning to end.
    Good job Cindy

  • 1 year ago

    by Everlasting

    Yup, one must endure the pain. I like the part where the husband asked his wife to stay in the room and when he asked them to not open the door. Though, for a moment I thought that two hours wasn't enough... thye needed more than that.... (just telling what went throug my mind as I read the story).

    Overall, the story was sad but it had a happy ending. I wish all stories could have one. I enjoyed the read. The story kept me reading till the end.

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    So very touching from the beginning to the end. What all we have to endure in life and I see a woman with such great strength. Life is like a rollercoaster with so many ups and downs but with each a lesson is learned. I also feel the love this woman had within herself and for others. I could go on and on. Add to my favorite

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    One thing most of us believe is that this well written mini novel is based on very real events , much like the poem I wrote almost fifteen years ago (which will be one of my requests for you to read) the happily ever after is as romantic as the continued story of Adam and Eve of those that assured me of a paradise all I need do is accept to become my destiny

  • 1 year ago

    by donna

    I enjoyed reading this. I felt the sadness, related to the trapped emotions inside and was so glad of the happy ending!
    Good work

  • 1 year ago

    by Gasttlee

    Wow, deep. You also bring classic fairytale phrases here in a unique way and more modern like.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Wow!!! I am blubbering like a baby right now. Good job