I don't know what parts are fiction/non-fiction in this as I said to you in the pm you sent me of it, but it's a heart breaking read - each and every part gripped me and kept me reading to see what the outcome would be.
The end is a lovely little remedy - a ray of sun and a reminder that things can and will get better.
All the very best
Its a like a story within a story, a life within a life and I could not make out where fiction and non fiction started or ended. Nonetheless, its a heart rendering story and it also shows when there is love to support, understand and care nothing else is needed to heal a wound..good job!
Yup, one must endure the pain. I like the part where the husband asked his wife to stay in the room and when he asked them to not open the door. Though, for a moment I thought that two hours wasn't enough... thye needed more than that.... (just telling what went throug my mind as I read the story).
Overall, the story was sad but it had a happy ending. I wish all stories could have one. I enjoyed the read. The story kept me reading till the end.
So very touching from the beginning to the end. What all we have to endure in life and I see a woman with such great strength. Life is like a rollercoaster with so many ups and downs but with each a lesson is learned. I also feel the love this woman had within herself and for others. I could go on and on. Add to my favorite
One thing most of us believe is that this well written mini novel is based on very real events , much like the poem I wrote almost fifteen years ago (which will be one of my requests for you to read) the happily ever after is as romantic as the continued story of Adam and Eve of those that assured me of a paradise all I need do is accept to become my destiny