Came back to reread this piece. Really is a beautiful collab...I can tell who wrote which stanza....lol..only because I know one of the writers style so well.
Excellent job both of you :)
I cannot think of two better gents that you guys. Your writing styles have blended in such a way that I would describe as delicious. So if you don't mind I am going to taste your seminal poetry now...
Oh, *slurps* this is divine, the metric beat the sing song quality is making goose bump all over. The rhyme that all good love poetry should have is exquisite. I am full, but I want more...
For I, my darling, love you
'Till the very end of time,
I breathe each waking moment
In the hope that you'll be mine.
Yes, god damn you man, I will be yours. I mean you only had to ask!
So take the rose I pick for you
And run with me through streams;
Dispel the nightmares plaguing you
And ever share my dreams.
But, what about my dress, it is dry clean only? Still, the rose is pretty and you could carry me if you like *looks up at you and smiles sweetly*