Gel, such a beautiful love tribute to your special love. I love the layout and each stanza is so special. This person gives you great strength and it's important to have when you are fighting through things-well done-
Gel, Gel, Gel, Gel, Gel!
This is as Mr Darcy pointed out, a classy poem.
I also like how you have numbered the stanzas.
The rhyming and imagery, spot on! The only thing I could see is the first stanza doesn't really rhyme as the rest does, but to me it didn't matter, the flow was still there!
I also love the little note at the bottom! :)
You had me hooked to this piece the second I laid my eyes on it (get it - haha!)
Hi Naomi. ..bout the numbered stanza I always do that even when I was in high school. ...but when I entered to the site I minimised the Number thing coz some here use (* , ~0~ etc. ) so I adopt the culture. ..lol
1 year ago
by Ben Pickard
I never knew you felt this way. I suppose I have often been complimented on my piecing and intoxicating eyes...
I wonder what lead you to create this kind of wonderful love poems. You always install the feelings of paradise in your romantic poems which I very adore to read. Your poems are like the blended songs (Birds Songs) coming out from the loving female bird. Wow... this is very magical and valuable write. I find the act of true love and a deep explanation of love.