Thanks, Brenda. I've been immersing myself in the Sonnet form, trying to improve my knowledge. They don't come to me quite as easily as they do for other writers. We won't name names, hey! But, I'm glad that Sir Lancelot sonnet show off has left PnQ's. Lol
Michael, I liked this a lot. Not only did you write an acrostic but through in Sonnet just for the heck of it? I liked the story line, dark, brooding but yet love in there too. From reading your comments I know you struggled with meters but I think you really pulled a lot out with the confines of putting sonnet together-very cool!
Thank you guys. When I say these words out loud, I hear iamb, but now I don't know. I just write to how it sounds to be and try to start it off with an unstressed sound - 'try' being the operative word! lol
Thanks, again. I really do look to you both to highlight these details.
Luce, I might just take your advice - knowing me, I will write a perfect iambic sonnet for once! lol