Japanese Girlfriend (Form - Senryu)

by Augustus Black   Jan 14, 2017


My Japanese girl,
pulling me toward the snake
soup bar; I'm helpless.
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Date - 14th January 2017

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  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I smiled even if I actually don't know what a snake soup is. My first time to come across the word...hehe. The idea that she is forcing you...haha, it's funny. :-)

    • 3 months ago

      by Augustus Black

      In Japan people drink snake soup. That Inspired me to write this. Thanks.

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    Augustus, well done! I think I would be hesitant on approaching snake soup myself, lol.

    • 9 months ago

      by Augustus Black

      Ha! Ha! Ha!... Ya.. Right. Thanks for the comment.

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Give it a go, Augustus! We must be courageous if we are to win our heart's desire, lol

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    Stay away from snakes lol... Funny.
    Em

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great write, Augustus. When we are in love, we will be pulled anywhere!

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 9 months ago

      by Augustus Black

      Ha! Ha! Ha!.... Absolutely correct, Sir. But please help me, she is forcing me to drink snake soup. Ha! Ha! Ha!

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