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by trudy Feb 17, 2017
Sadness, depression /
I found it really hard dealing with the burns in my heart.
She finds it weird that she's breathing.
I don't know how i'm going to deal with this feeling, with this pain.
Wil she survive?
Should she move on ?
She experience it as torture.
How can a bird be on fire and still be alive.
Would the bird fly or would it choose to
Dug its grave and leave?
Trudy, welcome! A sad write with a lot of hope. I too hope the bird takes flight and both of you heal. I noticed a typo, will only has one l. Also didn't know if you meant "dig" vs dug at the end?. Well done-
Hey Brenda, Thank you so much. You're really warmth-full.
I meant dug, Im from holland so sometimes I mix it up. Thank you. I think I like both dug and dig.
by Ben Pickard
Welcome to the site, Trudy.
A sad poem indeed but one tinged with a little hope, perhaps. "Would the bird fly..." - let's hope so.
Take care and keep writing,
Thank you Ben :) Keep writing xx