Comments : Perceptions

  • 7 years ago

    by Phil

    I would love to be able to nominate this. Your words are always so refreshing and beautiful.

    PW

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Phil, you are such a sweetie.

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I got it Phil....
    Brenda this is refreshing....It made me think of my marriage to Mr Pike....

    I've always admired your beautiful words, your beautiful expression and your beautiful heart....Lovely poem written by a lovely lady!

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Andrea, thank you so much. I greatly appreciate your comments. My hunny bunny makes it easy to write about love. He truly is such a good man and I feel like I am the luckiest woman in the world to be with him.

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I absolutely love this, the ceo and the valet, brilliant

    Craig

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Craig, thank you so much, My husband is always joking about that. He's ok with my taking the reins running the household stuff. He was a single dad for a lot of years and he gladly relinquished that role.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Brenda, you always write beautiful words about love, ones that some can relate to and others wish they could. And I feel when you have found that special someone (I wish i had then others times i am glad i only have myself) you feel like you're on top of the world with them at your side.

    Perceptions what are those?? Well, in my opinion its how someone, anyone perceives us, how they judge us and people do unfortunately some of them wrong and some of them so right but sometimes peoples perceptions' of us and ours of them are well and truly wrong. Anyway, here this person perception of you is so, so right!!

    1/ All I am going to say is you are beautiful and when someone tells us this we never believe them. Maybe it's the past or maybe it's just how we feel about ourselves that we just can't believe them so we do joke about how they can't see properly. Etc because we can't see our own beauty and we'd be very modest if we did but some people are very confident in the way they look so can

    2/ Absolutely loved this part Brenda and its so lovely that you have found the one and you are so trusting that he will never hurt you and I'm really happy because you deserve an honest kind of love that never ends even when (and I'm sorry to say) when one of you passes because its that kind of love that will last forever and ever and it makes md beam reading your stuff about your relationship.

    3/ When you're in an honest relationship full of love you both take the flack for stuff and neither is above the other and that's how it should be.

    You made my heart melt with this. Huge hugs, Em x

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Em, you always do such a beautiful indepth thought process on my writes, thank you for that. I hold out hope that one day you will meet that special one who makes your heart sing and treats you the way you should be treated. He's out there, I just know it! After my previous relationships I thought I would never meet someone like him, but there he was and it's been magic ever since. Hugs to you sweet girl!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brenda,

    What a simply beautiful poem with some magical sprinklings of rhyme throughout, which you know I like!
    When we find ourselves in a relationship as equal and understanding as this, we can count ourselves lucky indeed.
    I'm glad this has been nominated, else I would have done it myself!

    All the best, Brenda.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Ben, thank you so much! I really do consider myself extremely lucky to have this man in my life. I think we both feel.that way. He's the mac to my cheese and together we are really cheasy lol!

  • 7 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I couldn't help but smile when I was reading this piece. It's so loveable. I also like your reply to Ben, "he is the mac to my cheese, and together we are really cheesy" jaja priceless.

    I feel that way too. XD

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Awww, thank you! I'm so happy for you too in having that special someone. Isn't love wonderful!

  • 7 years ago

    by Koan

    ~smiles~ Sounds like you have a perfect partner there my friend...
    Enjoyed the read, thank you!!!
    I have justfind that partner in Trish and its amazing....

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Koan, thank you so much. I am so happy for you and Trish. It truly is wonderful when you find that one who makes your heart sing.

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Brenda,

    I saw your name and look if there's new...then this one is very sweet.. I'm can visualize the the scene teasing each other with sweet compliments...i love the last stanza also it shows that in every relationship there's a king and queen..i must stay ahead and the other one will follow... Good flow... Stay submissive..lol

    Hugsss

    Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Gel, thank you so much. He is my sweetness and I really don't know what I would do without him. Hugs!