Comments : Cross me [I dare you]

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Wow, this says to me that you yearn for this person you lust after even love to notice you and sometimes its hard when someone gets so under your skin yet doesn't even look our way..
    Fantastic write

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An intriguing write that will receive my nomination later...if I remember!

    Take care and all the best,


  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Reading previous comments I agree, but it speaks to me of something a little more animalistic.

    Short sweet and very powerful



  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very different and very inviting and at the same time there is
    a hint of passion lurking in the lines that it comes out without saying too
    much. Your choice of words and the way it is penned takes my imagination
    to far off places...very nice!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    Amazing write! Well done :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Nice work, MaryAnne!

    True intimacy requires courage, but is the deepest level possible between two people.

    Love, Ingrid xxx

  • 1 year ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Sensual write Ms Piano

  • 11 months ago

    by Robin Carretti

    I love this style short to a sensual point.