Comments : Rapidly, I'm Falling

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Insects can swim and turtles can fly,
    I'm in love oh (sigh...)
    ***

    ^^

    The whole write is beautifully penned, Gel, but I really do like this line. Lovely poem.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 7 months ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Ben,

      Hohoho.. .. Mr. Pickard isn't easy to please. ...Thank you so much. ..is it an A+ now? lol

  • 7 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    You are merciless for giving me this feeling,
    It bounced off the lower ground up to the highest ceiling,

    This bit really got me, so low and so high. To just be in the middle.

    Beautiful witting

  • 7 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Good job Gel, it took be back to that time of experiencing a first love. The range of emotions, flying high by just hearing her voice, hitting the floor when she made another choice.
    5/5
    Ken

  • 7 months ago

    by sim 84

    Beautiful piece of art

  • 6 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Gel this is freaking awesome, word choice etc is spot on throughout and your metaphors are excellently executed

    Awesome job!

    Ben

  • 5 months ago

    by Em

    Shamazing! That is all Xx

    Glad to be back xx

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow again Gel! I love your forms. It's breathtaking! This one is as Em says it is...Shamazing!