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by Ben Pickard
Insects can swim and turtles can fly,
I'm in love oh (sigh...)
The whole write is beautifully penned, Gel, but I really do like this line. Lovely poem.
All the best as ever,
by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
Hohoho.. .. Mr. Pickard isn't easy to please. ...Thank you so much. ..is it an A+ now? lol
by CJ Maleney
You are merciless for giving me this feeling,
It bounced off the lower ground up to the highest ceiling,
This bit really got me, so low and so high. To just be in the middle.
Thank u so much for the comment
by CRAFTY KEN
Good job Gel, it took be back to that time of experiencing a first love. The range of emotions, flying high by just hearing her voice, hitting the floor when she made another choice.
Hey Ken thank u so much
by sim 84
Beautiful piece of art
Gel this is freaking awesome, word choice etc is spot on throughout and your metaphors are excellently executed
Shamazing! That is all Xx
Glad to be back xx
Wow again Gel! I love your forms. It's breathtaking! This one is as Em says it is...Shamazing!