One more night

by Fredy Sanchez   Jun 17, 2017

One more night falls delicately in the horizon..
And While others sleep I start rising...
As yet another day jumps into the abyss..
Letting go, just like someone who found true bliss...

And The sun hides like a kid in trouble....
And I, hesitating, peek out among the rubble...
To catch a glimpse of her face...
Forgetting she left with no trace...

While the moon starts a ballad accross the sky...
Sharing this dance with all the birds that fly...
Melancholy sits nonchalantly next to me,
And for a second, I reckon, its just her and me...



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  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Though? I can feel the yearning/wanting in this piece it's lovely even if quite melancholic

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Lovely piece of writing

    Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Kereen

    Beautiful absolutely artistic

  • 1 year ago

    by Lvi

    the sun hides likes a kid in trouble
    the moon starts a ballad

    ^^wonderful and creative.

    Beautiful visuals throughout!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Fredy, I haven't logged on for a while so it's lovely to come back to such a well rhymed and well written piece of poetry.

    All the very best,


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