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by Fredy Jun 17, 2017
Love, romance /
One more night falls delicately in the horizon..
And While others sleep I start rising...
As yet another day jumps into the abyss..
Letting go, just like someone who found true bliss...
And The sun hides like a kid in trouble....
And I, hesitating, peek out among the rubble...
To catch a glimpse of her face...
Forgetting she left with no trace...
While the moon starts a ballad accross the sky...
Sharing this dance with all the birds that fly...
Melancholy sits nonchalantly next to me,
And for a second, I reckon, its just her and me...
Though? I can feel the yearning/wanting in this piece it's lovely even if quite melancholic
Lovely piece of writing
Beautiful absolutely artistic
the sun hides likes a kid in trouble
the moon starts a ballad
^^wonderful and creative.
Beautiful visuals throughout!
by Ben Pickard
Fredy, I haven't logged on for a while so it's lovely to come back to such a well rhymed and well written piece of poetry.
All the very best,