Comments : One Moment

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    No words for this, Mel. She sounds like a strong woman and fighter in every sense of the word.

    All the best as ever.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Awwww, Lady Mel, this just gutted me. I'm sending prayers and hugs your way.

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    This brought tears to my eyes and I really wanted to nominate it unfortunately have run out of nominations. This is so moving and emotional and I know what you are going through since my Nan also had a stroke. Sending you lots of warm thoughts and hugs and a hope that she will be ok. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    I hear you loud and clear. I hope your Nan pulls through, I keep you in my thoughts

    Em xx

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    My dear sweet beautiful Lady! I am in tears yet again from hearing about your Grandma! So much love and prayers to you both! <3 <3

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is heart wrenching.

    I emanate the wishes of others


  • 1 year ago


    Wonderful to express such love for your Nanay, my prayers along with the others for her speedy recovery.

  • 11 months ago

    by anand singh

    A beautiful and realistic write with in depth feelings of love and caring. Yes, we all know that at some point and time we have to go through this but still panic when the moment does come. Thank God that she pulled through. No doubt the love care and concern of you and your family played a role in bringing her back to be with you all. Another beautiful piece.

  • 11 months ago

    by Natalie84

    It put us in there too. Imagining it as if we lived it!!! Beautiful write!!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    Nice poem by you. I liked it so much.

  • 11 months ago

    by Sai

    A very moving write. It's the worst when we can't do something for the people we love as they're suffering. Sometimes all we can do is watch, and wait. Sending good thoughts for you and your family.