Comments : Catalyst

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Wonderful write Milly! It is indeed a scary place we find ourselves in these days.

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    Brenda beat me to nominating.. this is fab - the rhyming is great and the poem honest and raw.

    Take care
    Em x

    Edit. 1 suggestion.. last two lines both rhyme with here, my suggestion would be (and it's only that) to change the last one to near..

    • 2 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you for your lovely comments x

    • 2 months ago

      by Em

      Great minds :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Love this powerful rhyming piece Miss Milly

    Michael x

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is very powerful yet again, Milly. It is well-rhymed with a very challenging message.

  • 2 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    We are alive and kicking
    Humanity is not dead and lost
    Though all that has transpired till now
    Exacts a heavy cost.

    We have been here for millenia
    And yes we've made a mess
    Millions of people slaughtered along the way
    Because someone thinks they know best

    We are not sheep and not born to follow
    And we won't fit the lunatics plan
    As long as people like us exist
    This earth will not be damned.

    Craig

    • 2 months ago

      by Ren

      <3

  • 2 months ago

    by Ren

    A truly powerful write that reveals the many awful truths of our suffering world. Amazing job!

  • 2 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Milly, you hit it out of the park! It's spot on, you bought the farm! It is something that I would have written in a heartbeat. You have portrayed the world and it's issues to a "T", the Media in bed with the Terrorists far away from those innocents who have to beg for a cup of tea. Truly a world under Satan's control, mankind has failed in its governing of the Earth. I can't wait until the Prince of Peace Jesus returns and as the Prophet Isaiah had written thousands of years ago, The Government shall be upon his shoulders! God will Govern with justice and Righteousness where man has miserably failed, the environment will be restored to an even better condition than it was in Creation before mankind fell. Great work, added to my Favorites!