Comments : Your flight, my pain (mirror oddquain)

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, Ms. Meena, you have painted a picture that strikes deep...a person you love walking away...and you...crying there. This was beautifully crafted, with a visual threat of a form. And the last four lines...they hold so much meaning. Sometimes, love is not completely expressed in words alone... but in making great decisions for the person you love. Loved this to pieces. Great write!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Loved the lay out of this

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Meena, love this! The format is so cool and your whole write is amazing.

  • 1 year ago

    by Lucifer

    Writing such structural poems is always difficult.
    I never even heard of mirror oddquain, and you wrote it like it's a piece of cake for you.

    But the emotions you poured out is not easy, especially in such situations in life where you have to let go of someone very special to you.

    Not even the screams of our heart and soul reach them.
    We just see them going away from us.

    Anyone, can relate to this poem. Meena

  • 1 year ago


    Very nice Meena, crafty layout with flowing words from a broken deeply wounded heart, a love abiding in the Soul.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a treat this is to read, Meena, not least because of the truly fantastic visual it provides. Glad to see this nominated.

    All the very best as ever,


  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    Gorgeous write!

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is a true winner. Awesome. Take care.

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Thank you everyone for taking the time to read and
    comment, appreciate it very much...take care

  • 1 year ago

    by William Mae

    Beautiful poem Meena

  • 11 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judging comment

    "Your fight, my pain (Mirror oddquain)" By Meena Krish 10 points

    It's been really difficult to pick my top 3 poems this week and even harder to pick my number one, there are just too many wonderful words.

    However this piece really stood out for me. I love the way it is formatted and it certainly grasps the readers attention.

    The poem itself is beautifully written and you can feel the emotion within it. It is such a shame something so beautiful is tinged with sadness.

    Stirling work (10)