Comments : Anonymous Falling Stars

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    Poetry at its best

  • 1 year ago

    by Lucifer

    It is my defeat to be reminded everyday that I will not be able to write like this.

    As Mark said : poetry at its best.

    I can't be a star like you.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As sad as this is, Mel, there is also a tragic sort of beauty inherent.

    Well written indeed,


  • 1 year ago

    by Everlasting

    I like the flow in this write. I hope you are okay.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Beautiful...Sadness all wrapped up in a very wonderful way Miss Mel

    Much warmth

    Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Lady Mel, damn it woman this is so sad! So very beautiful but sad....I a absolutely loved it. Hugs my friend, I hope you are ok...

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    A beautifully heartbreaking write my love. Sending so much love and more your way <3

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you my sweet, really happy to hear from you!

      Thank you all for your lovely comments. :-)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Be still my heart - this is beautifully sad

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Sad however beautiful written.

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    There is nothing more I can add that has not already been said

    Simply wonderful

    Craig x

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    One small and tiny suggestion I have for this piece, is the last word of your poem.
    When ending a poem, it sounds so lovely and flowy when you use a two or three syllable word. Death is a sudden stop to your poem....try the word alive...just to yourself you don't have to add it...I'm just want to give you another angle to look at....

    This poem is breathtaking, I do hope it Grace's the front page!

  • 1 year ago

    by RustySoul

    Wow what a heart wrenching piece with a touch of metaphysics! Great write Mel.

  • 11 months ago

    by Fredy Sanchez

    Great piece!!! Amazing imagery

  • 11 months ago

    by Sherry Caayupan

    Well done! I liked this about feeling like an outcast... sad poem but nice write! :)