Comments : My soul

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Mark

    I had to re-read this over again...it's really profound. Even now I'm not sure...as if you torment yourself by picturing her.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    "Whenever
    I try to sketch her beauty
    in the canvas of my eyes,"

    This is amazing ... like Mark, I've read it several times ... so wonderful to find one so beautiful, but at what price? I'll be thinking about this one for a while! x
    =^.^=

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Free verse

      Thanks for the appreciation, kitty Kat lady.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Jamie

    This is genuinely the best poem I've read in a long time. Holy crap. Nominated without a doubt and if this doesn't win, i will be so sad.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Free verse

      No idea about winning but Thanks a lot Jamie for the nomination.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Em

    This is extremely poetically beautiful

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    This really is just lovely! Well done-

  • 3 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow! This is is breathtakingly beautiful, Shane. Added to faves.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Free verse

      Thank you Craig and lady Mel

  • 3 weeks ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Simply gorgeous

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Free verse,

    This piece has beauty throughout, with a delicate read of intrigue. The imagery is abstract, which makes it even more interesting.
    A wonderful piece of writing and a joy to read

    Michael :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your front page win! A well deserving win for a well deserving write.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Congratulations on your win Free verse great to see this on the front page

    Michael :)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on you win.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I'm so glad this won Shane, congratulations! x
    =^.^=

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Free Verse congrats!!!!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats

  • 2 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on your win, Shane!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Free verse

    Thanks you so much for the wishes.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Jamie

    I am pleased this has won. It was my honour to nominate this. Keep writing!

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I'm sorry but for some reason I previously missed commenting on this poetic gem. It's beautifully written with amazing visuals and I dont think anything i could write could do it justice. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Milly x