Comments : My soul

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    I had to re-read this over again...it's really profound. Even now I'm not sure...as if you torment yourself by picturing her.

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    "Whenever
    I try to sketch her beauty
    in the canvas of my eyes,"

    This is amazing ... like Mark, I've read it several times ... so wonderful to find one so beautiful, but at what price? I'll be thinking about this one for a while! x
    =^.^=

    • 1 year ago

      by Ya----Na

      Thanks for the appreciation, kitty Kat lady.

  • 1 year ago

    by Jamie

    This is genuinely the best poem I've read in a long time. Holy crap. Nominated without a doubt and if this doesn't win, i will be so sad.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ya----Na

      No idea about winning but Thanks a lot Jamie for the nomination.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    This is extremely poetically beautiful

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    This really is just lovely! Well done-

    • 1 year ago

      by Ya----Na

      Thank you Em and Brenda.

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow! This is is breathtakingly beautiful, Shane. Added to faves.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ya----Na

      Thank you Craig and lady Mel

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Simply gorgeous

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Free verse,

    This piece has beauty throughout, with a delicate read of intrigue. The imagery is abstract, which makes it even more interesting.
    A wonderful piece of writing and a joy to read

    Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your front page win! A well deserving win for a well deserving write.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Congratulations on your win Free verse great to see this on the front page

    Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on you win.

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I'm so glad this won Shane, congratulations! x
    =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    Free Verse congrats!!!!

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on your win, Shane!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ya----Na

    Thanks you so much for the wishes.

  • 1 year ago

    by Jamie

    I am pleased this has won. It was my honour to nominate this. Keep writing!

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I'm sorry but for some reason I previously missed commenting on this poetic gem. It's beautifully written with amazing visuals and I dont think anything i could write could do it justice. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by Emily Wacker

    Congratulations on the win! Well-deserved!
    -Emily

  • 4 months ago

    by Nee

    Whenever
    I try to sketch her beauty
    in the canvas of my eyes,
    I have to give a part of me
    to make it look alive.
    ^
    Love this! :) I have soo much to catch up on. I love this poem man!