This made me want to keep reading more! Forreal.. I love the metaphoric prases used in here. Brings the writing to life even more, in my opinion. Wtbs, also adding this to my favs as well. Please, don't stop writing.
How Joyous It Would Be by Mark points 7
Here we have yet another astounding piece by Mark one that oozes with his love for a special person and a longing that this person would feel the same and he gets his happy ending. Everything about this just flows perfectly, the words, the beat of the piece and the rhyming.