Comments : The cycle of desensitization.

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    All I'm going to say is I really hope my nomination shows how much I appreciate this write. Not once have I used up all my nominations in one day.. My goodness that ending is the most raw hard hitting piece I've read in an age and it resonates so much with me

  • 2 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    There are many of us out there to whom this will this will resonate.

    We do not mimic sentiment. We are infuriated. How many have lost friends, lovers or comrades to these acts?

    If I were not past it and were allowed to do so I would join back up.

    The armed forces and governments throughout this planet have tried the hearts and minds game. It did not work and never will.

    The only solution is not one I like to contemplate.

    Craig

    Amazing poem by the way

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Wow, I am so glad this is nominated. A very strong write that so many of us can really relate to-it's the unthinkable that drives us to do just as your poem says-well done-

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    Very powerful and thought provoking! Societal responses and dealing with such violence is explored here in this great write

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is brilliant and profound. True and tragic. These lessons never seem to be learned and solutions never found. And repeat.
    I'm so glad this is nominated! x
    =^.^=

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    We want change but are unwilling to start small changes within our selves... I personally want to change the way things are but can't get past my own dilemma a lot of times. This resonated deep as this is as Kitty puts it...true and tragic. It is very well put, great piece.

  • 2 months ago

    by S s...

    This is the truth about the today's world which we all have accepted.
    BTW, loved how you woven all those emotions into words.

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful imagery in a desolate and ugly world. Loved the visuals. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your HM this week. All my best wishes Milly x

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENT:
    The cycle of desensitization by Poet on the Piano points 10
    I absolutely loved the title of the piece and though I'll have to admit to googling desensitization it fitted perfectly because I think we all have our own cycles of coping with the things we are afraid of and the poem did not disappoint... Everything seemed to fit perfectly like a glove, the words of the piece are weaved together beautifully making for an astounding piece overall.