Comments : A Prayer (for Em)

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Marky Mark - I am so glad this is nominated...
    This piece is amazing.. and such an excellent piece.. Em will love it when she reads it... :)

    Thank you xx

  • 1 year ago

    by Ya----Na

    Read my prayer
    Oh great one
    Drain not that
    heavenly fountain.

    Mark, though I have no idea, but I think Em is going through tough times of her life.
    I also join you in this prayer to ask lord for bringing happiness in her life.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Mark thank you so much I needed to read this especially as I've been feeling so crap appointment after appointment to see what they can do to try and stop the blindness but right now I'm just on a dozen and one tablets to try and stop the swelling which is causing the blindness but I'm not sure they know what they're doing I'm such a rarity it's unbelievable (lol)

    Thank you for everyone's prayers they mean so much

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael


    All I will say is this is a lovely tribute to a great fellow poet
    full admiration fella :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    No real words, Mark. A lovely sentiment, wonderfully executed. How can Em not like this?

    Take care

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I have to agree with all others. How can Em not like this. So sweet. Take care

  • 1 year ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Such an emotional write and written straight from the heart. Very moving you wrote this for Em and I send my prayers, healing thoughts and everything else to her!

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment
    This is one of the best heartfelt and warm prayer written
    for another fellow poet. I like the layout and the way one
    sentence linked to the next making the read flow smoothly.
    Though its long I felt this prayer has gone in depth am sure
    Em would have loved it and would have been touched by it.
    Hope that this prayer is heard by our good Lord…
    take care