Comments : Painfully Pleasant

  • 5 months ago

    by Guilty By Design

    I love the ending to this, it flows nicely.

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I love this. Painfully pleasant... As sad as the situation is, this is wonderful work.

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Forbidden fruits - can end up tasting bitter.

    A good account of a situation, put together well

    Michael :)

  • 5 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I've kinda been out of the game for a wee while so forgive me if I get things a little wrong in anything I say.

    Firstly you rhyme a little like I me (yay I'm not alone) "smiles"

    Totally loved the flow of the poem and the content. For this reason I am nominating it.

    If I had one criticism it would only be that the last line of the second verse (stanza) could really have benefited from the addition of one word to aid it's flow.

    I don't measure and calculate, I do not word count. Sometimes you just feel and think.

    All in all

    Pretty fantastic

    Craig

  • 5 months ago

    by Blue Smurf

    Hi guys,

    Thank you for the comments, I appreciate it.

  • 5 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is excellent! The flow, content and rhyme are spot on and the subject very relatable :-)
    =^.^=

  • 4 months ago

    by Brise

    Wow! I love this ! It is beautifully written !