Comments : In The Shadow Of St Nicolas

  • 11 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Nice rhyming and an alternative Santa with conflicting agenda. Would make a good movie. Most enjoyable read. Best wishes Milly x

    • 11 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you Mills.

      If it ever was a movie it would be one I would deffo watch.

      Craig x

  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great twist on the traditional Christmas eve deliveries! Well done, Craig.

    All the best

    • 11 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks Ben,

      Ya know the way I think by now I love to look at things from a different angle.

      Regards

      Craig

  • 11 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Haha ... trademark 'twisty-Craig' ;-)
    Love it! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 11 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Got have a little twist my dear lol

      Craig

  • 11 months ago

    by Michael

    Haha! I agree with Miss Kitty,
    This has your name all the way through fella

    Nice one
    Michael :)

    • 11 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks dude I think lol.

      Glad you liked

      Craig

  • 11 months ago

    by Fredy Sanchez

    Really good piece!!! From the first lines to the end I was hooked and I really didn't want it to end! 10/10

  • 11 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Wow

    Thank you so much

    Craig

  • 11 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Excellent write!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Craig, fascinating twist with this. I was reading and going: "ooooh this is creepy." I liked it a lot, you never really think of there being checks and balances with Santa-