by Abstract Poet Jan 3, 2018
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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When I look at how we began; |
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I still love him very much. |
by Michael
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Abstract P |
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Thank you Michael! |
by mossgirl19
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Abstract, this is beautiful, I can feel the love, subtle and bittersweet, in your words. I just feel that the flow could improve if you work on where to break the lines. It could give your poem a different intensity or weight. A friend poet once told me that reading your poem aloud can help you identify where you need to break the lines and start a new line. But don't doubt about it, I absolutely loved this and I felt your emotions. |
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Thank you Mossgirl19! |