The Fall

by Ren   May 26, 2017


It wasn’t the fall
That killed her-
But the many hands
That failed to reach out
And catch her
Before
She
Jumped

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  • 6 years ago

    by Zia Mikaela

    This is an excellent piece! Although genuinely, i felt haunted.

    • 6 years ago

      by Ren

      It is a heavy subject. I feel haunted, too. Thank you for reading and commenting!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Trisha Harris

    Enjoyed this thanks 4 sharing!

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Glad you enjoyed this, and thank you for reading and commenting! It is much appreciated!

  • 7 years ago

    by Amrita Singh

    Such a beautiful poem :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much, I truly appreciate it!

  • 7 years ago

    by Hope

    Love it.

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much!

  • 7 years ago

    by Walter

    Wow..I love this. You couldn't have said it any better!

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)

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