Comments : True Colours (another messed up sonnet type thing)

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely done Craig! Like a snake in the grass, lying in wait. There is indeed a lot of those types out there causing chaos when they can.

  • 3 months ago

    by Ren

    That last lineeee!! WOW! Amazing write, Craig, and your rhyming rocks!

    (<3)^Click!

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Craig,

    written in your style, with your name all through. A raw and chilling piece.
    Well done fella
    Michael :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I simply had to read this because of your afterthought (another messed up sonnet type thing), lol.
    That's all irrelevant anyway; it's the content that counts, and this is excellent work.

    Take care, Craig

  • 3 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Well said Craig ;-) ... monsters indeed. Great write that flows and rhymes perfectly! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Craig wonderful write that captures well the monsters that lurk in many guises in our midst. A sobering thought. All my best wishes Milly x

  • 3 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Morning everyone

    Thank you all for your comments and I'm sorry for the slow response. Things been mental work wise at the moment and not been logging in so much of late

    Renegades and respect

    Craig

  • 3 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes these monsters come in different shapes and sizes
    and at times the innocent fall victim until its too late but when
    all are aware I doubt these monsters will ever dare to grow!