The chance to fly

by Phoenix ¥   May 9, 2018

When you had the chance
To fly
You said No
And I still don’t know why.


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  • 1 week ago

    by Eu•phan•asia

    Without reading the comments and figuring out what this art means. The mystery makes you ponder. Often times, it’s best left that way.

    To fly or not to fly...
    When one door closes another is open.
    I would choose to fly and never be constrained.
    -1 luv

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em (marmite)

    A very mysterious piece here but reading Mr Ds comment and your reply it seems to make sense... You wanted him to go maybe things were said in anger "I don't want you anymore" "f#@& off go home" and his reply was merely "but I am home because home. Is where the heart is and my heart is where you are"

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      He he if only Em. No ... his home is somewhere else sadly and he had the chance to go, but didn’t.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A profound piece. Agree totally with Mr Darcy's comment. I think you can spend a life time flying from place to place, adventure to adventure yet when you find home and the peace that comes with it. The need to go ceases or at least decreases.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thank you for your insightful comment Milly. Maybe this person just knows they are ‘home’ x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    When you feel like you're home, you stay.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Ooh Mr Darcy, you speak so much sense. He was at home. Thank you x

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