Comments : Timeless

  • 1 month ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This will definitely go in my favorite box.. Hugs to you

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Bless you Miss Dagmar thank you :)x

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A most enjoyable piece with great visuals and I think the last part is just perfect. Too often people are quick to think prosecute but why? There is more to life than money and stress. Just getting back to ticking along and forgiving and forgetting is a great way of thinking. best wishes Milly x

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly :) and yes I agree :)x

  • 1 month ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was really fun to read and I like the tones in this piece too, like you could also find the life lessons as Milly alluded to. Really neat personification or even metaphor though. I could also picture dealing with consequences of a situation we were thrown into, feeling like our hands are tied and there is no escape or second chance.

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you MA, yes this can be taken on different perspectives :)x

  • 1 month ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I want a pint of what this man's drinking, please.

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      "Time at the bar, if you please"
      But always time for a gentleman's measure! ;)

  • 1 month ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is amazing Michael, so so fantastic to read.

    I must disagree on one point though.

    Time does not heal it just eases the pain slightly. Some wounds never heal. I also, despite being small in stature have a memory like an elephant and carry a grudge like a pack mule ;-)

    Regards

    Craig