Thank you

by HeavenzEyez   Jul 27, 2004



You came when I had fears
And you wiped away my tears

I’ve never felt like this before
And I can’t ask for more

How did u make me feel like this
With just one kiss

You helped me sort out my mind
How could anyone be so kind?

When you looked into my eyes
You showed me a surprise

You showed me light
So I could be alright

You showed me how you feel
And I know its so real

As you hugged me
You made me so happy

You touched my heart
And joined the broken part

As you spoke
I lost words, I couldn’t talk

You stopped time
So you could be mine

When I started calling
You came, and stopped me falling

When I needed you
You came to me, saying it was the least you could do

I want to thank-you
For what you’ve done and will do

I know you’ll always be here
And our love will never disappear

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Awwwww thats soooo sweet. I wish you two the best of luck. I hope I get that lucky someday, still trying to find the right guy for myself right now. You're really lucky to have someone that you love and love you back like that. Its a great poem and I love it so I gave it a 5/5. Keep doing good. If you ever need help on anything you can always ask me. :-)
    Love
    Kala Dearing

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I agree the flow was a lil choppy, maybe it's not the words so much but the style meaning instead of have 2 lines a verse have 4 or have one big one because it makes each 2nd sentence very abrupt and breaks up the flow, also if you one line has 5 words for example make the next not to long say have a make of 8 words because that'll also improve the flow! Moving onto the content though, it was very well written and beautiful, now combine it with flow and you'll have a ReAl KicK-aSs poem:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Million Tears

    really nice poem!!! i liked it!!! i flowed very well and it was very powerful!

  • 19 years ago

    by Christina

    it would have been better if you added more words to make it flow better, no offense

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