Wow that was really well written, and I love the moral of the poem. Wow that was a very good connection you made. Just wow, I've never thought of that that way. Awesome, thought-provoking poem! Keep it up!
What can I say about you Michael..I have yet to have a chance to speak with you, but surely, it was destined for me to come across your poetry. Very divine, very Honest and very determined. You write like a genious, and I thought I was good!
5/5 for one who deserves it. ( and trust me...I rarely comment, unless its worth reading...)
and God Bless...