Haunted Soul (part 3)

by vanessarrr   Sep 26, 2004


That night I tried to spar away
The voice that came and begged to stay.
I lost control, I couldn't think.
They all just happened in a wink.

That haunted soul I can't forgive.
She ended my desire to live.
It wasn't me, who sought to die,
Possessed, I screamed my one last cry.

That message, I can now release
With reckless voice, I speak with ease.
My presence now is everywhere-
A haunted soul with not a care.

"I know you'll kill yourself tonight,
Don't struggle nor attempt to fight.
You've done so much to trigger pain,
Your guilt, your death, you cannot feign."

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  • 19 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    I really like this poem you have really great talent i love all your poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    what a great job. This was truely a perfect ghostly series. I gave you a 5 on all three. You have a great way of using words. Talented very! Well Great Job on all of these.

  • 19 years ago

    by SWAPNIL SAWANT

    wow u r a gr8 poet.

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    I enjoyed the entire series. And have to second that the ending was particularly great.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bryce Ellner

    And it all comes together. Great way to end it and it flowed together like a song. Plus they were long parts and easy to keep up with. Nice job, I'll look foreward to reading some more tomarrow. Right now I gotta go to bed. Take care~

    --Bryce~

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