Loss*

by Brandy   Dec 3, 2004


Missing you everyday hurts inside
It seems just yesterday you were laughing, smiling and being happy
Then out of the blue you were gone
You were taken too soon
You had so much more to offer and do
We needed you but God needed another angel, so he chose you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Flynel

    It's a sad poem.. nice work.. I hope it isn't the truth? :o

  • 16 years ago

    by christopherinchaos

    Great poem overall, and the last line, puts a nice finishing touch. you commented on mine, so i did the same for you. i really liked it and can relate to the feeling of it.

  • 16 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Good job on this poem. short, but still conveys emotion.

  • 19 years ago

    by Weeman

    most excellent brandy!!! i loved your poem, and am excited to read more...keep writing the great poems...
    weeman

  • 19 years ago

    by Brandy

    thanx for checking out my poem guys...

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