I enjoyed very much, for i have lost both of my parents. It is not easy, and the grieving process, sucks!!

Very well done, you may wish to edit a little bit. I noticed some spelling errors. Quite should read Quiet, just review. If you get a chance read some of mine.

I really liked your poem 6/6 Keep up the good work, please rate and comment on some of my pieces it would be much appreciated thank you :)

thank you

Becky, I wrote one similar to this one about my Mom. Great job, The pain stays, it gets better but it will never go away. Check out the one in my poems about Mom, I think I've wrote 2. Well written. hugs, lol, *Ann*

i can only sympathize for you, and i can only imagine how hard it must be. but ur rite, god chose her to be by his side for a reason. ur a very powerful person to put something so emotional on paper and have others judge it. but it is very amazing and i congratulate you for an astounding poem and being so strong in life. wonderful write! 5/5! stay safe, strong, and healthy!
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ps: thanks for the wonderful comment on my first ever inspirational poem, "Just For A Moment", i appreciated it!

somewhere in there you put quite when it should of been quiet , but other than that such a beautifully sad poem, woman, you better keep on writing! another 5

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Becky, that was amazing. The best part is the pure reality of it and that I can really feel the emotion in it. My grandma passed away a few months ago and I have similiar feelings about the whole thing. It's hard to sit back and watch knowing you really can't do anything about it....the want to hold on to them for dear life, and at the same time the want to just let them go....but the one good thing is knowing deep down that they're in a far better place than can be imagined, and the fact that they're never really gone because they live inside us each and every day. Beautifully written!!

Very sad poem Becky but beautiful at the same time. I can't imagine losing my mom, we are best friends... I'll need the Lord to give me a lot of strength to deal with that one when the time comes. Your mom is in heaven worshipping the Father, no pain, no tears..focus on how happy she must be. Stay strong!!
Take care and God bless you always!!
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Also thanks for the advice, I read it and I couldn't get your words out of my mind... you are such a blessing!!

Becky, I thought I had read it and a beautiful job you done writing. I will pray for you on this Mother's Day for God to continue to give you peace and to deal with the loss of your Mom. Mine has been gone for 8 yrs. and I truly hurt like it was only yesterday. God Bless you, my friend, and a Happy Mother's Day to you. I will be thinking of you. hugs, love, *Ann*

Oh my...this is heartbreaking! A lovely tribute to someone who even though they're gone are forever a part of you! Beautifully written~Holly

I only have one thing to say...........

" EXCELLENT"

Awe, that was a really sweet poem. I'm sorry about your loss, it's easy to see that you two were close! Great job, Keep it up!

this is wonderful. I think this is one of your best. I love my mom too. Marjan

hey, this one was so touching and
sweet. I love my mum too. she is
wonderful.
take care,
marjan

wow! this was a very powerful poem! i loved it! i know how you feel i lost my dad nine years ago, but i thank god that i at least have some memories of him! you have a lot of talent keep it flowing! im sorry for your loss but keep your head up! take care and god bless!

Awww... that was sad but sweet poem!!!
my grandpa which i care soo much about died of liver cancer... and it sucks cuz juz like ur mom, he slowly died, and i was in front of him when he had his last breath