Realization

by taylortws   Apr 24, 2005


I sit up at night thinking about my life. its stuck in a terrible place. death seems so close why wont it happen to me. i been sitting waiting for it to hit since i was young. my life my face my mind its all a waste. i shouldn't have ever entered your mind should have never crossed that line making it love. I'm strung out with no where to go I'm falling apart. time seems so slow i cant wait till i die.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    :( nice to hear from ya again, you okay? I do hope some of your writing it just off the top of your head and not true.. get the feeling it is. Very emotional piece, strongly worded. rock on.

    emma x

  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    Taytay.

    ..heh. It made me cry too.

    I hate it so much when you're sad. It scares the helll outta me. I wish you were happier. I dunnu what I'd do if you weren't around. =/ Cheer up hun, and if I can do anything tell me okay?

    <33Michelle

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    just just to tell you keep your chin up, theres so many people that care for u, including me! hang in there

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    hey, sorry i haven't been on to talk in a while, but i was gone on a trip and just got back, dead tired though gota get some sleep. great job on the poem! 5.

    ~PLP~

  • 19 years ago

    by Andriana

    i just started to cry after reading half of it...

    taylor, i love you so much. i dont think you notice how much i do. i wouldnt be able to live without you in this world. i hate to see you like this. id do anything if i could to make you happy than trying to help myself. i care so much about you. i dont think others understand that. im always thinking about you, and ill never stop. you know i love you, taylor.

    <3 andriana...