Comments : My First Prom…Pt. 1

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, That poem is really sad, heart wrenching and I have a heart of stone, I hope everything gets better for you, you are an amzing writer and I love reading your work, keep going and take care of yourself...

    katie! xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by ?

    I'm so sorry you have to go through that, you poem was so touching, I'm so sorry, I look forward to reading the next part, even though it may be as sad as this, I hope things get better for you, keep it up xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Fighter

    im so sorry your mom treats you like that. you're beautiful and one of the most talented people on this site. don't let her jealous words bring you down.
    beautiful, beautiful poem. this is definitely one of my favorites. keep up the amazing work and take care.
    Ariane
    -xXx-

  • 12 years ago

    by Unknown

    didnt make senes beautiful but i think you could of wrote it better then that (sorry)

    TheRealMan

  • 12 years ago

    by Danielle

    Wow, this is really really sad. I hope things get better for you. Don't let her words get to you. Keep writing, you're an amazing writer.
    Take Care.
    Always,
    Danielle.

  • 12 years ago

    by lauren

    THIS POEM YOU WROTE WAS GREAT. YOUR A GREAT WRITER!

  • 12 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    that was great I didn't want to stop reading..awesome job..this is pure greatness

    Unloved ♥

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah

    WOW!!! That is a great poem.......I'm guessing this is true right? I hate parents that act like that. I've always wondered why they even acted like that in the first place. They are just jealous of what you've turned out to be but they don't want to show it. They want to act better than you and so that's why I think they act like that. I gave this poem a 5!! Can't wait to read the other part!

    XoXoX
    Sarah

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Andrea, Very touching but well written. Take care, hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 12 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Pretty sad. I can't believe your parents are like that. Still it was good.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    can't believe your mom would say those things to you! don't listen to it k? because she's wrong. gonna go read the second part now!

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    So sorry about your parents...ugh! but odd structure, but nicely written!

    Love
    Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Aw, Andrea! I'm so sorry that this is true! It was a great poem! Don't listen to your mother, you're beautiful and you have a ton of talent writing! I wuv you so much and I miss you tremendously! <3

    ~Krissy

    *big bear hug*

  • Omg thats and incredible poem but so sad. Hope it gets better for ya...

    Jemma

  • 12 years ago

    by Taylor

    *gasp* your mom shall pay when the monkey nuts take over the world. . . i shall let the monkey nuts shove pineapples up her ass. . . hehe. . . sorry! but seriously the supersperm will infect her so much that she shall be known as the w.hore of the monkey nuts hehe well i'm glad you got to go and got to ride in the cool limo and i'm sure you looked pretty hott and i'm sure all the supersperm would want you but you and i are the rulers so that just can't work. . . damn. . . poor sperm lol well keep it up! i love it!

    Love, Taylor

  • 12 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    awww.. Andrea.. :'( that's so.. sad.

    &hearts ya!

  • 12 years ago

    by -nOt*sUrE-

    this was a good poem ... but its sad (did your mom really say that stuff to you?! )
    -Chelsea

  • 12 years ago

    by Solace

    Man I'm on the verge of tears... :( Don't let your parents get to you.. Cause' you're a wonderful person... Keep your head up and take care (always) xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 12 years ago

    by destiny

    it's AWESOME!!! if it's true, then that's messed up-but the words rawk....never change!

  • 12 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    wow, your poem is really good I have just started writing poems i have only written 1 so far and i am working on another i hope mine will be as good as urs one day! <3~ Megan