by -Erin- May 4, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
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The ride looks fun, |
by Emily
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Wow, this poem is leading to a sequel. I highly reccomend one! |
by Carmen
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this is definently a great life poem. using an amusement park ride in your pov is a great way to explain a certain situation in life. great way of expressing it. 5/5 |
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Great job!! i gotta say you did awesome! 5/5!! |
by Shy
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Wow this is really good |
by Sean
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Seemless, kind of without time and then suddenly brings you to the realisation that it's not all so fun anymore. |