thats a really good poem!!

love it!!!! nice to have you back :) beautifully written!! keep it up!
-xXx-

That's exactly how I felt the first time I kissed my girl. This is a really awesome poem.......

Wow beautiful! Very well written and I am sure you'll never forget that 1st kiss! You could feel your passion well done! Take Care! Brooke~

Nicely written! I really enjoyed this poem. The flow was excellent! Good job:)

Beautiful,very well put into paper, a poem to enjoy reading:)

There is a constant rhythm that flows through this poem, which is always a bonus. An interesting piece.

Keep Writing
Nici

This was a beautiful poem. Good job.

Great poem!! I loved it, definately a 5/5!! Check out my work if you get a chance!

That was awesome 5/5 keep up the good work!

oh wow..that was really nice.

Wow thats excatly how a first kiss almost happens, maybe more or less tongue action ;0

i liked the flow of the poem, but maybe the last line needs to be touched up but overall it was good,

WOW! This was so sweet! I loved it!
Love always,
Haily
xxooxoxoxo

hell yeah david this is good.What a way to write it!

this was really cute. then it got real. haha, i really liked it. It brings back memories for me. hehe. Great job,

Love alwayz,
Katie Schettler

that was really good

That's quite a first kiss you had. Beautiful poem. The rhyming works nicely.

xxx

such a sweet kiss i wish my first had gone that perfect

I remember my first kiss. It kind of happened like this. I loved this poem. It's so beautiful! It brung back a lot of memories. Your an amazing writer. Keep up the great work! xX