The Suicidal Teen Girl (Nursery Rhyme)

by †JustAri†   Jun 6, 2005


*Sing it to the tune of the itsy bitsy spider*

The suicidal teen girl cries everyday
Down came the rain and washed her pain away
Out came the blood from her skin cut by the blade
And the suicidal teen girl tried to die again

*Last line, alternative*
And the suicidal teen girl killed herself today.

*Hope u liked it, I was kinda bored and I was lying in bed last night trying to go to sleep. Please r8/comment if u want.*

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    WO. O_o Thank you! All of you!

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I even sung it out loud :O It went really well with the tune to. Creative and deffinatley worth a high rating. :D Nice one hun.

    LoveView,
    // Kals.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    this poem certainly deserves a better rating then the 3.3 rating i saw up there, i gave it a 5 k hun?! this is a very creative idea and it fits well with the itsy bitsy spider!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 18 years ago

    by xxamberxx

    i gave u >5< think its gud! take care xx

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