The Suicide

by Piper   Jun 6, 2005


How much longer
can i take this pain
what i am feeling
i cannot explain

it takes over your body
and won't get out
by the time you know it
you begin to shout

screaming and hollering
going insane
taking the razor
slashing your vein

your life has ended
the pain went away
but the grief of your loss
will always stay

for the people out there who just can't take the pain.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Thank you for this poem. I know you don't agree with cutting, but it means a lot to me as a cutting for you to write something like this because it really shows that you care. Thank you again.

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    wow. i love it. im speechless 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey such a brilliant poem - shows emotion and feeling. I love the structure of it. Keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Julez

    Wow you are very talented. I can relate to your poem so much too! comment on my other ones! I loved it! keep writing crystal!

  • 18 years ago

    by Piper

    if any one needs to talk i am here comment on my poems please thanx

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