hey gurl u amazed me... i was like man some ppl gatta like u and ur poems r so meaning full wit emotion ur talented for 13 lol i jelous someone who is younger then me is better but i just noticed from most of your poems u have gone through alot of heart breaks and i am sorry for that thank u so much for commenting on my poem lol and i will comment u the same.. AwSoMe pOeM
by the way i loved this part

"i count down the day
from today till forever
i cant wait till fall
and hopefully its not never"

hey this was a great poem..5/5 keep up the good work..
Lylas always and forever,
Evans Gurl

i dont know. i just don't know. it's like so freaking hard to figure this all out. i know cam is a jerk but... it's like i know but don't believe it in a stupid way. i'll think about it. that was stupid to say cuz i've been thinking about it forever. :)
spiffy Tiffy

o yes that poem was like... "wow' tee hee. i can't believe i feel happy. well i kinda dont. im in a really fuc ked up mood, i want to have a talk with you just to ... talk. about everything. cuz i wanna tell sumone sumthing and ur the only one that will truly understand or at least kinda care. im so messed up. once ur 'un grounded' im coming ova to ur house. got that. hey have you heard the song 'sugar we're goin down' by Fall out boy? its awesum. okay well now im just blabbing. okay listen to this. i'd rater call kyle then cam cuz i noe that cam loves jennifer and i'm like hell i dont really care anymore and kyle would actaully listen to me. like yay! like if i had to take someone to the movies i'd take.. um.. never mind. i feel more comfortable talking to kyle about things. like when he is just alone with me or working on sum stupid project he doesn't act stupid and if someone near us bothers him or acts stupid he like starts yelling at them for being immature. it's funny.
goodness gracious holy shi t i gotta go and type you an email instead of this on here cuz frankly only the top part was talking about your poem.
spiffy tiffy is pretty nifty

hey hun i luv ya like a sis and im always here for ya

that was a great poem, i loved it sooo much, keep up the good work, plz rate and comment my latest "you'll be replaced"

hey courtney this if tiffy. before i get into things i love you. either answer he will give will be good for me in sum way. if he says no then i'll let em have it for leading me on and i'll be with you more and if he says yes i'll be freaking happy because i'll finally have what i've wanted all along. a guy to love who will actaully love me back for who i am. but i'll get so caught up in him that i wont be in contact with you as much cuz i'll be in la la land floating on pink fluffy clouds. so rite now im apologizing for what i will become if that is what is going to become of me.im sorry and if i never talk to you again come over to my house and slap me and sit me down and talk to me. or maybe i wont fall in deep maybe i'll be fine and everything will stay the same. or maybe we are just worrying over nothing and he will say no and life will still resume on the play button not the pause or the fast forward. once again i love you sooo much and im sry if i hurt you. once again hurt me if my eyes go glassy. eep! i've written so much i should have done this in email. o well love you forever and for always
i'm also sry if i blow of friend get togethers for him. drag me off with you if that is what happens. thanx ok well. um i'll see ya in a couple of dayz.
*hugs and kisses*
ur "hopefully" friend
Tiffani

oh my lord this describes how i feel precisely
you are a very good poet keep it up

wow great poem you are really good and i hope you keep writing!!!

omg great poem... really liked it!! please check out my new poem "feelings i CAnt overcome" n tell me wat u fink MWaZz..stephy :):)

Aw I like this poem, well done. In a few spots, the rhymes seemed to forced but it was really good still. keep it up!:)

Damn...thats like...that reminds me of me and my ex courtney we broke up and she was scared of love...thats why she dumped me...i dont understand i cried so much and i dont usually do that...