I can't help with this one, Other than its hard to follow what you are trying to say. I gave it a 3/5 it was just ok

brilliant poem. I'm going to put you in
my favorites. you're really talented.
that's my idea.
much love, Marjan

I really like this, i went to a private school till 7th grade, and had to move to a public school, and no one else went there w/ me. But, i didn't like the people in my grade in 6th. But GREAT! poem. I loved it..

Love Alwayz,
katie Schettler

good poem. I wrote one about graduation too...but not nesessarilly the same. good work.

really cool!! i liked it alot! great job
peace,
abcede

wow that was really good
Lots Of Luv
Shawnda